Spots

Life love and time

Specks

Specks and spots
Of you lie here
I clutch to you
And I’m all fear
What is happening to us
I feel the cloud approach
Us as we lay under trees
Beauty is all around
I want to stuff it in my
Jeans back pocket
to call my very own
And take it right on home

SPecks and spots
They blemish what little
Time and air we have
Left to breathe
On this wonderous earth
We have called home
For so many golden days
Some blue black red
Some white so damn pure

Spots and specks
Take me right
Back
Back to you
Back to your
Shack
Your seaside shack
Unblemished with no
Spots no speck
To spoil that
Almost forgotten
Near to perfect
Perfect view
Of you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I want to hear the song "Love shack" now.
"Spots and specks
Take me right
Back
Back to you
Back to your
Shack "
I liked the complete poem. The above lines were my favorite. Thank you Julie for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

perfect view of the sea, perfect view of you, perfect view of you and me...
life does get spotted---and some stains never come out---but if we don't mind wearing them...we can find near perfection in future...and that would be finding love and peace...serenity.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Thanks Jacob for taking time to read my poem and review

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Looking back
Looking back
To perfection

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Opinions please
Honest
Many thanks