Time and Poetry

Time and Poetry

A Poem by Kimmee Jean
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I CAN'T STOP WRITING!

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Time's grains continue down 
And my eyes feel heavy
My heart screams "FIVE MORE MINUTES!"
While my mind sighs

The words won't stop spilling onto this pad
They flow like breezes around me
Bringing relief and strength but make me cold
Like all the emotion is letting go

My anger and past
My love and present
My fears and my future

Father Time taps his foot with impatience
as He continues to wait for sleep to take me as well
He feel frozen here, trapped
Like the seconds never moved

My feelings are rushing and gushing
Like the very blood in my veins as my pen runs
It frolics and dances upon this paper
Maybe the Salsa? Cumbia? or maybe the Cha-Cha?

Yet, as the dances come to a close
So does this piece
Time seems to return and move
The heart feels relief
and the mind, peace

© 2011 Kimmee Jean



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excellent! great word play. I have written pieces like this as well, that talk about writing as a cathartic expression, with the ability to bring relife and peace.

my favorite part:
The words won't stop spilling onto this pad
They flow like breezes around me
Bringing relief and strength but make me cold
Like all the emotion is letting go


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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excellent! great word play. I have written pieces like this as well, that talk about writing as a cathartic expression, with the ability to bring relife and peace.

my favorite part:
The words won't stop spilling onto this pad
They flow like breezes around me
Bringing relief and strength but make me cold
Like all the emotion is letting go


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Never enough time to do "it" right,
just enough to do "it" over...

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It frolics and dances upon this paper
Maybe the Salsa? Cumbia? or maybe the Cha-Cha? Line these lines...very creatve


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good poem you have here :) I really enjoyed some of the rhymes here, the form is great and the 3rd stanza is really cool and I really enjoyed the second to last stanza! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kimmee Jean
Kimmee Jean

Overland, MO



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**** Formerally known as Risa Jean**** Been here since 2007 and randomly update. I am currently working on two short stories and will probably be putting up more poetry. Alot of my poetry is inspir.. more..

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