The guilt behind your smiles

        Your guilt behind your smiles,
       Your head hides in the darkness.
           You've became a wreck,
         You've become so heartless.

         You wake up every morning,
         Smiling when you're guilty.
         You keep trying to deny it,
         These lies are getting filthy.

            You know those lies
          I know you know, I swear
          Now come on , admit it!
        YOU STOLE MY TEDDY BEAR!

Author's Note

I bet this isn't what you expected!! :D

Reviews

[Dawn Dreamer]

Nice twist!! It brings a nice playful surprise to the ending- and no, I didn't expect it at all! Thank you for sharing this! :D

[Coyote Poetry]

A surprise ending. I liked the poem. Started with a edge and ended with a surprise. Thank you Amy for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Amy Rose]

It's such a delight that you review all my poems. Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

It is my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Woody]

hahaha this is a funny one and you're right, I didn't see that one coming. I hate teddy bear thieves.
good one Amy.

[Amy Rose]

I know. Teddy bear thieves don't deserve the wonderful teddies in the words :(

[HeatherWoodard]

Haha this poem made me smile.
Unexpected ending😉

[Amy Rose]

Thanks Heather :*

[Jamestown]

This poem was adorable, I definitely giggled, good work

[Amy Rose]

I'm glad you liked it ;) I actually didn't think it would end like that, but I wanted to bring a smile to everyone's faces