Shower

Shower

A Poem by Kaotic Barbie
"

My happy place.

"

I like to graze the shower with my presence
At the end of the night when all is quiet
Just sitting at the bottom, feeling the hot water,
beat all over my body like a steaming riot.

And In there is where I am most confortable
Away from all the mischief and sadness
In there I can be warm and finally alone
Naked and miraculous in that hot bliss.

Just sticking my face up to feel the water run
All the way down my essentiality
The feeling feels so free, like a hug
If only they spoke in matter of factuality.

But the water does speak to me
Telling me it will be okay in its comfort.
Hiding my tears from all the world to see
With the water's flowing effort.

In here they will not get me
For I am protected by this waterfall
surrounding my elegant statue
With no threats of any appall.

So leave me to be in this place
This little world I have to just get away
Because tomorrow I will deal with it all again
Because tomorrow is just another day.

© 2008 Kaotic Barbie


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

I like to graze the shower with my presence
At the end of the night when all is quiet
Just sitting at the bottom, feeling the hot water,
beat all over my body like a steaming riot.
Away from all the mischief and sadness
In there I can be warm and finally alone
Naked and miraculous in that hot bliss.
So leave me to be in this place
This little world I have to just get away
Because tomorrow I will deal with it all again
Because tomorrow is just another day.
but dear you dont have to be afraid of tomorrow..tomorrow will always be yours
its just having too many blows from this damned world..that sent fear
i really do not see anything but elegance that fits my precious Queen
with all her might..she can just move her finger and all at her feet will kneel
fearing her might..for she is strong ..i know and so beautiful
wonderful write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

That was beautiful. There's nothing like a hot shower at the end of a hard day to make you feel better, besides maybe cuddling. I've so been there! Yay for identification. And showers. Yum.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like to graze the shower with my presence
At the end of the night when all is quiet
Just sitting at the bottom, feeling the hot water,
beat all over my body like a steaming riot.
Away from all the mischief and sadness
In there I can be warm and finally alone
Naked and miraculous in that hot bliss.
So leave me to be in this place
This little world I have to just get away
Because tomorrow I will deal with it all again
Because tomorrow is just another day.
but dear you dont have to be afraid of tomorrow..tomorrow will always be yours
its just having too many blows from this damned world..that sent fear
i really do not see anything but elegance that fits my precious Queen
with all her might..she can just move her finger and all at her feet will kneel
fearing her might..for she is strong ..i know and so beautiful
wonderful write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

115 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on December 8, 2008

Author

Kaotic Barbie
Kaotic Barbie

Baltimore, MD



About
My name is Kati. I'm 20 years old and live in Baltimore, Maryland "And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. Th.. more..

Writing