A Dream

wish for ideal world free of hate and full of love

In the bed at night,

I dream with heavenly sight,

With my magical feathers,

I take a wonderful flight.

      Through my dreamy eyes I wonder,

In a place called the Ideal world,

    At sun’s distance from lies,

Frost of love everywhere,

    Clouds of happiness, showers of joy.

No one is rich, no one is poor,

Life is sweet and wonderful,

I wandered from door to door,

Never seen beings so cheerful,

With magnetic eyes and sea deep love,

     Their bright faces reflected the light,

I took my first flight like a dove.

           Sugar sweet voice,

        Milk white minds,

           Purified my soul,

        In love warm hearth,

    I got new birth,

After all this I opened my eyes

to the Ultimate Truth...

               by Shivalik Kalsotra

Reviews

[Cindy Marietta]

I really enjoyed reading this, especially the ending, tied everything together really nicely. Great job!

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

thanks for your valuable time and review

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Innovative n creative work ... I loved the plot ... Good one ...

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

thank you so much

[~]

"sun distance" "dove flights" your words are but melody.

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

my pleasure