Umbrella Girl

To the Umbrella Girl: Despite we now walk different paths, your smile I will never forget.

If there ever was a day

That I began to like the rain.

 

Standing by your side.

Smiling under your Umbrella’s shade.

 

A hundred moons have set.

A centi dawns have raised.

 

So many colors

have flowed into my life ever since.

 

Meeting you,

The purest soul I have met

 

Seeing the world,

Through your kaleidoscope I will never regret.

Hand in hand,

the Lion and Umbrella Girl

 

Walk together towards the future.

Into many rainy days to come.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[MeithaSoekotjo]

Rain and a girl are always a good pair!
There's always something with these pair.
They are two females for me.
Both have tender and lovely character.
And sometimes we could be strong and hard too.
Your poem shows how the female's character has brought you to some lovely feeling and moments.
So, by reading the description of this poem "To the Umbrella Girl: Despite we now walk different paths, your smile I will never forget." - I can feel the other feelings of the poem, which are strong and hard.
I love your poem. It just brought me to the love that I have (always) for the rain.
Good job Kirasoul! Btw, I just remember that have a poem about Rain too. I made it in my last month Poetry Class. See you around!

[Circe]

This has a sweetness and innocence to it that makes you feel young again... well illustrated!

[Kirasoul]

Thank you for your kind words Circe :)