Perfect lie

I can feel you crawling under my skin.

Those dagger words are consuming me

and  my brain is filled up to the brim.

I can hear you in my head.

Whispering.

Whispering your favorite lies.

I can feel your pounding them in

as I shriek out my piercing cries.

My soul is being torn in two

and I have to choose between my heart or mind.

The only problem is 

your opinion is dominating mine.
My heart it aches 

because it is not given a chance to breath.

My mind is a broken wonderland

since I see zero truth in what you believe.
I am shaking in a feverish way

and I tremble when I you in sight.

Trying to think of things I could say

I am beaten with all your might.

Black or White.

Stop or Go.

What makes your life so perfect?

What proof of perfect do you have show?

Reviews

[Joshua Donahue]

very captivating and emotional and honest! :)

[Ron Reardon]

A Very powerful inward look at the dark side of things. Very well done.

[sierra_beautiful]

beautifully written!

[Alz Alz]

I had to come back and read this again :) very cool, especially the whole "nip/tuck" kind of relation. Picture is creepy ^_^ love it

[Alz Alz]

ooooh, interesting and "creepy"... Very nice, i like your poems! Emotional and deep... You're very creative!

[Tate Morgan]

Interesting to be haunted by anothers feelings of grandure Cast them off and fly freely by no one has the right to own your sky

[Dillon Cotter]

this is beautiful. emotional yet very deep and creative. i like this one.

-Will

[deeps]

Kind of an emotional write here. I like the feel of this write. Flows wonderful and full of powerful emotion.