i see you

"HIM" stands for my father and "you" is obviously my brother

plese forgive me

but i wont be home again

don't look for me,

you'll never find me.

please brother forgive me

but your warm embrace only shilded my eyes

but they have been opened to the scars you ware

not the scars that  can be seen

but the wounds of the heart

the ones that never truely heal

you tried to keep  HIM away from me

with each passing day my eyes open wider

untill i see it

i fill so dumb for not realizing it

and nowi can never forgive HIM

by hurting you he hurt me

I only wish i had the love you showed me

I fall towards the river

as i fall the last image i see is you

I hit the water

my fingers ligtly touch the water's sufface

thank you

again as i die

i see you

 I died to see you love me

 

Author's Note

i use the word but in the poem alot sorry and the subject jumps and around alot all in all it sucks again sorry

Reviews

[Greg Skura]

Wow! i can see that there is great deal of pain in your view of your father and it is sad to see when the people we love get hurt by other people that we love.

[Shadow Writer]

They say there is no love stronger than a brothers love. Somewhere is an answer that will soothe the heart. Powerful and emotional piece. Phantom.....

[Voice]

Your brother is lucky to have you don't forget it. Also remember to follow your heart...you know what you want don't be afraid to stand up for it...

Voice

[rachel <3]

this is really good, i can feel the emotions hovering under the surface