My angel..

" this poem is different from the others..."

my broken wings and your crooked smile

of all the things, i was in denial

the things i loved the most, taken

and my heart and me, forsaken

till my angel, you came to rescue me

came and touched my heart and set me free

of all the pain i was in

all hate and all the rage

when you pulled me out

and released me from my cage

you fixed my heart like it was before

you made it new

i thought i needed help,

i only needed you

you were my healing, you were my pain

you were my love,you were my strength

and now my angel, i wont forget

to feel your love without regret

for i am human, and you much more

and you will leave one day, like before

but ill remember your love

ill remember your name

for you were the only one

who took away all my pain...

 

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Sad and beautiful. Nicely written. Great poem.

[E.j.aka.Hannah]

very very pretty...sad...but beautiful.

[BLACKCRUSH]

Excellent job! I loved this, it was very moving and sad in some parts but beautiful. I also loved the title as well :)

[Bran the Broken]

simlpe and touching....some parts seemed rhythmically insecure, but that's all subjective.