I appreciate that you have maintained the haiku's ruminative attention to natural phenomena. This is at the heart of the form. The variant syllable count is also laudable. As you obviously know, the haiku provides freedom through discipline.
What I like in this piece is an underlying tone of irony that I am not sure if you meant to convey. However to me, spiderwebs are life. I mean a tiny little organism used its body to create silk, then spent a better part of an afternoon making something intricate. Your narrator just looks beyond it to something else. See what complex thoughts you wove with just three lines! Well done
WARNING!!---
my writing approaches Mature most of the time, read with caution if you are concerned ,or so WC thinks?
- I'm a retired southern woods walker..who writes and lives modestly..I love n.. more..