Waking up

Very beginning of a story i'd like to write.

Have you ever had a nightmare? One so particularly terrifying that when you finally manage to snap yourself awake everything doesn’t seem quite real? The room is too dark, too quiet, only the sound of your shallow breaths echo through the black as you try to figure out where you are. The remnants of the nightmare seem to seep out into the corners of the dark, threatening to reappear as you desperately try to escape the hold that your subconscious has over you. This usually lasts a couple of seconds until the familiar feel of your soft sheets and the warm glow of the bathroom light drifting though the crack in your door slowly brings your racing mind back to reality. This was all true for Will except for one thing he was soon to find out… his nightmare was far from over.

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think :). I'd love to know what i could do better.

Reviews

[12.09am]

I LOVE THIS SO SO MUCH !! Really captivating

[Rose]

Wow, great intro. Would love to read the rest of the story, keep writing.

[Jose Rivera]

I have one big piece of advice for you...... please continue to write the story. I really enjoyed your writing style, I am a fan of horror, and found this to be very intriguing .... Thank you for sharing.

[Liam Davidson]

Thankyou, means alot :)