Discrimination

Discrimination

A Story by "Fanatical Dreamer"
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Short Journal

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As a Multiracial citizen of Trinidad and Tobago who have experienced both comfort and poverty. It hurts me to see persons displaying prejudice, a citizen democratic rights being restricted or a person being persecuted at their workplace without a reasonable justification.


Whether black, white, yellow or brown we as citizens deserve to be treated equally. Our color or social class shouldn’t determine our opportunities in life. Every man’s hard work should take them to that place where they deserve and every delinquent person should take full accountability for their doing, even if they consider themselves to be superior. 



                                    



© 2014 "Fanatical Dreamer"



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Great write,keep writing

Speak Out!

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you! I will
Yeah, lets stamp out isms altogether. Nice one, N

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
Nicely written...yes it is an ugly thing...Rose

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thank you
It would be nice if everyone practiced this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thanks for reading
Bravo. I couldn't agree with you more. Racism is one of the most wicked traits a person can have, and I condemn it in all its forms.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Amen to that,Thanks for reading
I like this because it's such an honest thing. There is no excuse for racism or any discrimination in any circumstance and it is great that you are one of the people that agree. People can be very cruel in this world yet the great thing is there will always be people who are kind. Great write with truth behind the words

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thanks!
This is more of a journal entry than a story, but I do agree with this. I think it could be turned into something bigger and explored more in depth, but I do agree. Nice write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


xXChanceXx

5 Years Ago

Where you pick which genre it is, there is a one that says "Journal" but yeah.. Welcome.
 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Ok thanks for the hint, I'm kinda new to this
xXChanceXx

5 Years Ago

Welcome. Ah, nice.
This feels like the entry point of a bigger idea. Flesh it out, explore this deeper, ask new questions, make this premise into something you can own. You're on the right track! Good luck!

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

I must say your comments are very constructive.Thank you!
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i think for proper English citizen should be citizen's in this line:

citizen democratic rights being restricted or a person being persecuted at

now my review:

I loved it! i loved the message. Great job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thank you

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