Vultures

I guess its about the seeing the beauty humour and irony in death.

he looks at the sun
not the end of his gun
and it goes
bang bang bang

And the world is one man less
its such a perfect mess
and as carrion
he carries on in his weird little life

and the eyes of vultures
are the only eyes that see
and you can disagree
but I think its alright

he doesn’t look ahead
cause his eyes are ate
and he goes
on on on

Reviews

[emipoemi]

......deep
......thought-provoking
.......wow!

(I honestly can express my experience of this poem). Well done!