The Greatest Allure

Do you?

Do you understand of it, the allure?

Of insuring that you are not;

remembered...

As the greatest villian of the new world.

Can you understand of that, the allure?

Can you?

Reviews

[GalaxyGhost]

So this reminds me of a video I saw by a YouTube channel under the name "Allure" by Zealous Creative. For some reason this poem definitely reminded me of that and you should go check it out because I think there might be some similarities from what I interpreting the poem in the video. For example one of the lines in your poem says something the belt a villain who seems to be very enticing and there's a character in the video that also is enticing type. There's so much more I can talk about the similarities but I think you should check out the video first.

[Davidgeo]

I'll check them out. This is certainly a derivative pile of words. I'd like to thin I stole the concept from Hemingway.... Some call that a creative problem, I call it being well read. If you're clever you will find parallels to "The Old Man in the Sea". To be honest, I'm slightly excited to see what Zealous Creative has to offer right now. It better be good "galaxyghost".

[GalaxyGhost]

I hope so because the video is really good and I wasn't disappointed when I saw it and it's actually good short film. At least in my opinion.