Ketchum, Idaho

. would you look at this? I wrote a poem... fu .

if it all comes back to prey again

on my own flesh again

against my heart again

this what's even closer

again into heaven

it's the leaving, the moment of

that thing again

the stains of a memory

before the moment of the cold

inside of the aching

the sincerity

is a clever deep insecurity

flickering

in the back

it's annoying

maybe that's why Hemingway

shot himself in the face

in f*****g Idaho

Reviews

[Nessly]

I'm looking. Indeed, you wrote a poem. Shocker. This one comes together stunningly. Your dark tone is captivating. Hemingway...

[Davidgeo]

I really didn't intend for that thing to be so depressing. It was gonna be about boring s**t like windmills and crap. Then I remembered... didn't Hemingway shoot himself in a really boring place? Seemed like a good place to stop thinking.

[Nessly]

I love your thought process!

[Davidgeo]

It only works sometimes. But I love it too... thanks nessly. I feed off your positivity.

[Davidgeo]

(not really though, stop being such a p***y and rip my word salad's to pieces)

[Nessly]

This is s**t. Do better. (Obviously my snark isn't snarky enough. I'll work on that.)

[Indra's Child]

A painfully accurate description of Ketchum, so I've heard... That was almost a joke, although I'm not trying to interpret. Enjoyed the use of the English language here. 100%

[Davidgeo]

I do love your screen name.

[Indra's Child]

'like'. You really remind me of someone I know by the way.