Better

Better

A Poem by TKlittle
"

. self awareness is the secret to improvement .

"

to his progeny,


"never resemble me."


said the despicable man,


to his beautiful family.






© 2018 TKlittle



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Short yet tells an intricate story. It also indicates a really important detail about growth, and understanding ones own weaknesses. I like how you say “beautiful family”. I personally can see this line in two ways, the disposable man’s nature has not seeped into his family, suggesting he has not completely failed them, or his own image of family is one of utmost adoration. However, there seems to be endless directions one could take with this poems meaning. It is meaningful, yet open to interpretation.
Enjoyed contemplating it!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

H L Rose

3 Months Ago

I see that, and thanks for the clarification. I like that interpretation, and it is so true.
TKlittle

3 Months Ago

I kinda liked your interpretation better. It's a very good thing this poetry s**t is completely arb.. read more
H L Rose

3 Months Ago

You can never beat the original intention of the poet. Many things are open to interpretation. I agr.. read more



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This sort of paraphrases all the words of warning, fathers have given sons and daughters, throughout time. Nice.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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TKlittle

2 Months Ago

Not all fathers.

Have you seen some of those son's of b*****s these days? Animals I .. read more
Self awareness is key to change, once you change, so does everything around you!
Very inspiring verse..... mistakes we make in life often regretted, can create wisdom to pass on.


Posted 3 Months Ago


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TKlittle

3 Months Ago

I really do believe that evolution is not simply restricted to physical traits. Neanderthal's never .. read more
Hebe

3 Months Ago

True I agree, but we can never be so sure of ourselves there are many ways we can become extinct. ... read more
TKlittle

2 Months Ago

Come now... that outcome, while very miserable, would not cause the extinction of life or even mank.. read more
Short yet tells an intricate story. It also indicates a really important detail about growth, and understanding ones own weaknesses. I like how you say “beautiful family”. I personally can see this line in two ways, the disposable man’s nature has not seeped into his family, suggesting he has not completely failed them, or his own image of family is one of utmost adoration. However, there seems to be endless directions one could take with this poems meaning. It is meaningful, yet open to interpretation.
Enjoyed contemplating it!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

H L Rose

3 Months Ago

I see that, and thanks for the clarification. I like that interpretation, and it is so true.
TKlittle

3 Months Ago

I kinda liked your interpretation better. It's a very good thing this poetry s**t is completely arb.. read more
H L Rose

3 Months Ago

You can never beat the original intention of the poet. Many things are open to interpretation. I agr.. read more
Change must always be welcomed for growth but what we show others is what we allow to be seen🌹choices echo out forever🦋

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Thoughts In Time

3 Months Ago

It takes a lot to use hurtful words but kindness it overcomes all🌹
TKlittle

3 Months Ago

Yeah... something like that. I like your style lady face.
Thoughts In Time

3 Months Ago

A bit of this and a bit of that that’s how it all works out, thanking you kind sir🌹
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Gee
My father was a grade A arsehole who cleared off when we were but kids with bums the size of shirt buttons. Now a dad myself I have been to my daughter all that I would have wished for from my old man if he had stuck around. She is a beautiful young lady and we are the best of mates.


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TKlittle

3 Months Ago

That's a good thing man, a real good thing. And not as common as you'd think.

You br.. read more
Gee

3 Months Ago

From past experience I know it is a lot less taxing on the heart and mind to be easy going rather t.. read more
TKlittle

3 Months Ago

in my experience too much good is what makes the bad so very enticing. even angels get bored I thin.. read more
I like this! And it's so awesome that you attached a song! That's like the best!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TKlittle

3 Months Ago

I'm glad you liked it. Rilo Kiley is an underrated band; I do love the way Jenny Lewis sings.
TK, you've nailed it! I've told my kids (now 21 and 23) since they were teenagers to model the behavior they want to see from their children (not what they see from me or other family members). You've said that more succinctly and poetically here.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TKlittle

3 Months Ago

That's high praise.
the two sides of life is clearly displayed in this four line poem, the joy and pain so well hidden that sometimes we forget why it exists in our lives. this is only my interpretation of the poem.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TKlittle

3 Months Ago

It's more about species refinement than any particular side of life. If you are a bad person with c.. read more
sette

3 Months Ago

parents being the model of the children
Nice poem. Really hits home a solid point. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TKlittle

3 Months Ago

Thanks for reading.
Well and succinctly put. The gentleman probably should have no worries in that regard.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TKlittle

3 Months Ago

Indeed. And thanks for stopping by.

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