A Varnished Life is Full of Color

A Varnished Life is Full of Color

A Poem by Davidgeo

unvarnished life is dreadful, dark and dismal
natures norm is chaos, pain and struggle
family, friends and culture remain our finest buffers
as varnished life is hopeful, positive and full of colors

© 2018 Davidgeo


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I like your language. I also like alliteration so I appreciate the line with “dreadful, dark, and dismal”.

I also like the sentiment. It’s like asking the question of whether ignorance is bliss, which is an intriguing concept to ponder and contemplate its implications.

I enjoyed reading!

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is beautiful. I hope more people appreciate how well you get your point across in such a short amount of time.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Thanks Ethan. That was a very kind thing to say.
Ethan

6 Years Ago

Of course.

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