Not Really Worthy of a Title

Not Really Worthy of a Title

A Poem by DDave
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"the difference"

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San's regret
Life is perfect
So maybe I'm cancer
But at least I'm descriptive
(blame the human condition)
For my presence 
And all of my insults
I can't make this s**t up
Nor would I change a god damn thing
(life is perfect)
Some love is hatred 
What paints the other side
(is the difference)
And nothing to be afraid of


© 2018 DDave



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and the first thing that came to mind was my Kundalini Yoga session this morning - totally relatable :D

'Nor would I change a god damn thing
(life is perfect)'

not many people can say this convincingly - love that

no nothing to be afraid of ... what are you reading lately ? It suits you X

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DDave

6 Months Ago

You don't wanna know. I don't even make sense to me most of the time.
DDave

6 Months Ago

...lately?



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I love the description and the formality of the poem itself. I find it to be intriguing in a distinctive understanding.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Amy
You did a great job at writing this. It shows how no one is perfect and you should accept things the way they are.

Posted 6 Months Ago


I see the wheels spinning a wheel within a wheel. You make the reader wonder

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DDave

6 Months Ago

That's high praise... thanks Cherrie. Wonder is a wonderful thing to instigate I thinks.
Cherrie Palmer

6 Months Ago

it is a poet's first and best job
This really touches a chord.
It takes a very perceptive individual to love hatred, revel in the smell of s**t. For most of the cretins that pass themselves off as humans, its all about face value. I wouldn't change a thing either.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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DIVYA

6 Months Ago

To each their poison :)
DDave

6 Months Ago

Some people just masturbate their way to happiness... others build model trains. I prefer high end .. read more
DIVYA

6 Months Ago

Knowing this world the way I do, there is worse, there is much worse...
I think the meaning of this one might be lost on me, but I’m gunna give it a shot because I really like the meaning I personally got.

I derived importance on the understanding that the way life happens is the most perfect way for it to happen. A confidence and appreciation for the way one has grown.

My favorite line is the last line “and nothing to be afraid of”.

I enjoyed analyzing this!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DDave

6 Months Ago

The meaning is irrelevant. It always is with me. That you thought at all about it in your own way .. read more
H L Rose

6 Months Ago

I’m glad !
and the first thing that came to mind was my Kundalini Yoga session this morning - totally relatable :D

'Nor would I change a god damn thing
(life is perfect)'

not many people can say this convincingly - love that

no nothing to be afraid of ... what are you reading lately ? It suits you X

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DDave

6 Months Ago

You don't wanna know. I don't even make sense to me most of the time.
DDave

6 Months Ago

...lately?

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