No Surprise

No Surprise

A Poem by Davidgeo
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it's a hard liquor and hand gun night
with a snicker and a won ton diet
underneath a metric ton of a jack a*s virus
bearing down on every single one of us
pleasant like, tonight
with a very pretty vicious bow on top. . .
tonight,

during hand gun and hard liquor night

we all of us everyone of us will be just,
like,
. . .
without even ever knowing it
was never not once already
deep down in every one of our inside's

this whole mother ducking time

it should be no surprise

© 2019 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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You captured what many often see or feel but don’t admit or act out. I think we most often take the temporary solution to the temporary problem, hard liquor to crush the day’s nagging pain. The music makes this move the reader closer to recognizing that dark place.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

I think we're all monsters. I also think we're all saints. (well, maybe not people like Ted Bundy .. read more



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You captured what many often see or feel but don’t admit or act out. I think we most often take the temporary solution to the temporary problem, hard liquor to crush the day’s nagging pain. The music makes this move the reader closer to recognizing that dark place.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

4 Years Ago

I think we're all monsters. I also think we're all saints. (well, maybe not people like Ted Bundy .. read more

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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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