Forest

Clouds of rain 

Hovering over the forest

 Full of life and energy 

The place where animals make their home

 Clouds stop raining 

The forest now damp and thick 

Thick fog now surrounds thee forest 

Feeling the cold yet soothing breeze 

Grazes thy face 

Enjoying the scent of earth 

After a shower of rain 

The thick fog starts to lift 

Revealing the golden sun 

Our beacon of life 

Without thee the balance will disappear

 Taking in the comforting warmth of thee sun 

Whose light gives us day

 

oh mighy benelovent forset

land of the ancient nymphs 

who reside within trees

oh might forest of thee earth 

you are my inspiration.

Author's Note

is there anything that needs improving and what is your opinion on it?

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Why don’t you personify the forest? As an example, I’ve written this rendition of your last verse:

Oh, beautiful forest,
domain of ancient nymphs,
nurturer of wildlife,
you’re my source of inspiration.