Invisible Wound

Her heart was stolen

her body was swolen

through the tears and the pain

she cried in the rain

why would he leave her

his explanation was a blur

her wishes for his love

she prayed to the God up above

to let him return

with his car that's auburn

and that light in his eyes

that showed her surprise

when he kissed her lips

then came the rips

the pain that she tried

desperately to hide

when he had left

creating a theift

of the poor girl's heart

so then she would start

to realize the pain he made

would indefinately never fade

she realized with horror

with her heart a-pourer

as long as her pain stayed a-ground

his exit became an invisible wound

Author's Note

sadening.................................................

Reviews

[Havatara]

Some of the words in there were misspelt, so I would check that over again. And the rhyming, to me, seemed just a bit forced. Maybe every other line instead of every line? Other than that I loved it. Great job.

[Little Amy Lee]

This is a sad poem,
aswell with beautiful detail.
Wonderfully written and a nice rhyming scale.
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