Remember

I remember when I touched her,

Soft to the touch with hair so fair.

Her smell  was of fresh lillys,

So beautiful and delicite.

I remember her smile,

It was like a sunset you don't

want to ever go away.

So very preshes you just don't

want to let it go.

She was the one for me .

Till I woke and it was all a dream.

Now I realized it was all to good

to be.

 

Author's Note

I want you to know Im a girl who want to let you know, I like to have different points of views and yes this is in the view of a guy :O

Reviews

[Hollywood]

You should try expanding your vocabulary a bit, overall it was a good starting poem. :]