Waiting

Waiting

A Poem by lostonewithlove

Waiting as I'm wanting to

Speaking as I'm spoken to

Changing to your point of view

Fading as I follow you

A boyish notion of false emotion

These words are spoken despite my love

A fool's devotion was set in motion

My eyes are open now

It's a glass cage so I can't pretend

You hide beneath the physical

I see it coming but I can't defend

You cut so deep, my belief is gone

Tell me what I want to say

Save me for another day

Break me, it's the game you play

Hate me as I turn away

© 2010 lostonewithlove


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lostonewithlove
I just felt like I needed to write my feelings

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wow! love the choice of words at the end. Awesome poem, I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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lostonewithlove
lostonewithlove

Chapel Hill, TN



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Hello my name is Katelin (: I'm 17 and I love to read and right. Over time my family read my poems and stories and tell me my talent is writing(: I love to write but mostly read also (: And I hope you.. more..

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