roses

you broke my heart
with your sharp words
and then tried to stitch it up
using your roses
but all it did
was dig thorns
into my mind
making me suffer
even more than before
-maaidah

Author's Note

why didnt you just leave me alone?

Reviews

[Yahallo]

Very nice metaphors. I like it.

[maaidah]

thank you!

[Andre]

Very nice poem.