Imaginary City

Imaginary City

A Poem by lucera
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This is about the feeling you get when you get deep into a book.

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White tones dance back and forth beneath hands

And elegant black dances under fingers

As sweeping winds blow into beautiful lands

Yet back towards home our eyes don’t linger

We know better than to feel afraid;

The sweet and familiar smells

Put us at total ease each and every day

And shows this land to be nothing but well

With bright colors and pleasant people,

With things we can’t find back at home

Like the castle-high stone steeple

That makes me glad to be alone

This beautiful place makes us feel bound

To it, with it’s smooth pale trees

And incredible discoveries yet to be found;

Abnormal but healthy inky seas

Able to carry us to far off places

On waves of intricately woven words;

Lands allowing us to imagine but never see faces

Through our journey in these impossible spaces

But some time, we must return.

We must take a breath and come home.

But each day, we realized we have learned

Something no one else could have dreamed of.



© 2017 lucera



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lucera
Thank you for reading! reviews are appreciated.

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Amazing use of words.
"And incredible discoveries yet to be found;
Abnormal but healthy inky seas
Able to carry us to far off places
On waves of intricately woven words;"
The above lines. My favorite. To discover and travel. Real wealth of a life. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lucera

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading!
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.



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Amazing use of words.
"And incredible discoveries yet to be found;
Abnormal but healthy inky seas
Able to carry us to far off places
On waves of intricately woven words;"
The above lines. My favorite. To discover and travel. Real wealth of a life. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lucera

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading!
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
This is so beautiful! I love your writing style and the imagery reflected in the poem! Thanks for submitting to the Inspiration Contest!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lucera

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much! :D
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I have no words........my voice is in my awe! Well done!

Posted 5 Months Ago


lucera

5 Months Ago

Thank you! :D
Very good representation of getting lost in a story. It's amazing where ink on paper can take us. We can visit grand castles and see dastardly villains taken down, all without leaving the comfort of our own homes! Love the creativity in this poem.

Posted 5 Months Ago


lucera

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much!

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Added on June 22, 2017
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lucera
lucera

Portage, MI



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