A Poem by Maria Fischinger

Children's poetry


Cloudy skies,
flashing lights at far zig zagging,
loud sounds,thunderstorms,
puddles, muddy soil.
Drip, drip, drip, drop
drip, drip, drip, drop

Dancing drops on my umbrella.
Dancing drops on the sidewalk.
Dancing drops are everywhere.
Drip, drip, drip, drop.
Drip, drip, drip, drop,
is the sound the drops make.

Water on my hair and lashes.
Water on my face and neck.
Water running down my body.
Water soaking all my clothes.
Swish, swash,swish, swash,
water squirts out of my shoes
shivers, and a...a... a... choooo!

Maria Fischinger. 2006

© 2008 Maria Fischinger

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Its such a cute piece.
Lovely use of onomatopoeia.
great read!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Splendid onemotopeia in this children's poem! Contagious rhythm to your words. I enjoyed this tremendously. Lydia

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on February 5, 2008
Last Updated on February 6, 2008


Maria Fischinger
Maria Fischinger

Chicago, IL

I am busy!!! shhhhhhhhh! Don�t interrupt me!!! I am busy classifying the green tones of the forests leaves. Don�t disturb me !! I am occupied watching the outline of the mounta.. more..


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