Suicide

Suckish life

Under consant pain

I can't take anymore

Constant anxiety and pain

I want to end it all

Death is the only
Escape

 

Author's Note

I will not accually commit suicide I promise

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

i have felt this way a million times in my life. This is simple yet deep, and I can relate to it very well. I love the way you flow with so few words. Awesome write!

[Aaron]

"Suckish life"
I find that to be an odd choice to start a poem about suicide.

It actually really works for the character. It's simple and quick sentences. It's straight to the point. It's honest.

Thanks for sharing.

[Steven Cash]

Ask Missy, if you do try, I will be on you like white on rice

[SmileBig :)]

I totally am with you on this one! I wish sooo freaking bad I could just kill myself...like, sooo bad. Im only here cause my best friend said he would kill himself If I did :/ anyway,.,hope things get better

[MusicLover]

i have no idea if they will. because of my apperence i am fat and ugly. I went on one and after he siaid it was a pity date. Then I get in trouble if i ask for a doller. I am in constant fear if i breath i will get grounded. So basically unless everyone changes, my life will forever spell suicide

[SmileBig :)]

Aww I'm sorry :/

[Pax]

Don't worry it's his lost...your a fine young woman...there is tons of fishes in the ocean...