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Any advice, thoughts, and/or constructive criticism would be much appreciated!

Whatever you do, never run back to what broke you

 

I read somewhere

or heard somewhere and thought

.

.

.

But what if they broke you

and left you to deteriorate.

Or else you left them

 

because life has got to be better than nights spent spewing 

words and blunt emotions at each other by means of a screaming match in the kitchen at 3:34 am,

goddamnit!

 

Everything that you hold to be true continues

to depreciate.

 

And you’re nothing but jagged remains­

strewn across the pretty tile floor.

 

So that in the moment of br  eak  ing

 

You’re the most intact you’ll ever be again.

Reviews

[TheRealSolution]

I like this poem a lot. Good Work

[Mamie]

Thank you!! I appreciate the kind words:)

[Nisreen]

Or maybe one goes back
to make a point
Nothing could possibly break you ......

[Athul Raj]

It's nice... Keep writing