Sakura

I seek tranquility -
Amidst the battle on Earth,
And I caught the
resplendent cerise tree.
Standing at the heart of
the wintry snow.
Flushed the soul of the cold
nihility.
The wind passing beneath each leaves,
turning to music, chiming -
Cloaking the scenic abode.


The wind blew hard,
Shedding each rosy leaves,
down they fell -
giving kisses of life to
the frosty land.


Amidst the theater of war,
The Sakura grew tall - bloom!

Author's Note

Sakura is my favorite tree, it reminds me of life, ancient and tranquility.

Reviews are certainly welcome ^_^

Reviews

[Madison O'Dwyer]

This perfectly sums up my day - searching for tranquility in a world on fire.
Thanks for sharing!

[Mirra]

Thank you for the great review ^_^

[Konigin]

Lovely
Astounding
Beautiful
I LOVED the visuals you created here. You're splendid wording brought me right to the scene.
AMAZING pen dear! ^,^

[Mirra]

Thanks for the lovely review Chelsea :-)

[Konigin]

Welcome! :D I miss you!

[Mirra]

I miss you too Chelsea :-) Miss this place :-)

[Konigin]

I haven't written anything in AGES. What about you?

[Mirra]

Haven't written anything yet. Been suffering from writers block and I almost give up writing thankfully that did not happen. So here I am, trying to find some inspirations.

[Konigin]

I believe that you will find something. You are a creative soul, I believe that you will write something that might bring to tears of joy! :D Good luck Hunny!! :)

[Mirra]

Thanks for always believing in me Chelsea ^_^

[Konigin]

Anytime Mirra! :) Glad to be here! XD

[zainul]

Amazing picture of sakura depicted.
I love your wonderful write.

[Mirra]

Thank you so much. Glad you like it.

[zainul]

You are most welcome.

[Aethereal]

I liked how your poem expressed how some things endure in the midst of war. I was inspired to write this tiny gift poem for you:


Sakura Tree

Crystal cold nihility
shadows every war
lest a calm Sakura tree
shatters its dark core.

[Mirra]

Thanks for the wonderful review ^_^

[Amduscia]

Excellently written. Well done.

[Mirra]

Thank you so much :-)

[Amduscia]

Truly a pleasure.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

down they fell -
giving kisses of life to
the frosty land.

This lines are very touchy.....

[Mirra]

Glad you liked it. Thank you :-)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes I do like the poem very much welcome :))

[Sami Khalil]

Wonderful write and imagery on this wonderful tree... You gave it an uplifting message...Bravo...................

[Mirra]

Thank you Sami ^_^

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........

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I loved this very warm feeling from it sort of like my morning walk this morning I felt a cool breeze just right it was as if I vision I was upon a beach:)))))))))))))))))) Awesome work:)

[Mirra]

Glad you liked it. Thank you :-)

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Your very welcome

[The Quill]

wow...this is amazing:) inspiring :) too good

[Mirra]

Thank you ^_^

[Cory Barrett]

Finding beauty in an ugly place. well written.

[Mirra]

Thank you for the review ^_^