Passion

A moment in time

Remembering the moment when we met 

Such joy bathe my soul .

My heart sing gloriously 

At a time when we met .

Those tender moments we have 

Bring out my sloven love 

With every touches awaken my desires 

I am falling deep into thee .

When we were apart 

Such acute longing came over me 

Paralysing my mind 

And emptying my heart's desires .

Oh ... How I hold you dear in me 

Like a Talisman for life .

To keep me safe and loved 

To always guard my tender heart 

As I've live for you and your love .

Reviews

[Lavender Soya]

Your lines are too soulful and melodic. I have imagined a tune in my mind. Great work Mary! I have always admired your poetry. They're just simply brilliant. :-)

[Mary Bradley]

Lavender Soya :-) you are being too kind ! In fact your reviews are the music to my soul :-)
I hope happiness is always with you dear friend :-)

[Lavender Soya]

You're welcome Mary :-) It's always a pleasure. I also like reading your reviews.

[W R Stowe]

Very nice description of how love hits us

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you W R Stowe

[W R Stowe]

your welcome

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Mary, I really liked your idea of Talisman. A beautiful metaphor of someone that we hold dear and is full of wishes. :)

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you moonskittles :-) ... I appreciate your kind words

[Tks]

Such a sweet, tender moving piece, Mary:) I feel the exact same way whenever i meet the love of my life

[Mary Bradley]

Thank you Tks :-)