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rememberance

rememberance

A Poem by Siliousneo

the stars,the clouds,the heavens above
no one will understand the kind of love
that comes to you when you least expect it
and sticks with you through the worst and the best of it
we have that love you cant regret it, for it will always
leave you with rememberance, of the nights we talked
to the break of dawn and the days we spent walking along
to the beat of our own little song, so when your down just
dont forget it, that we share this love and rememberance

© 2012 Siliousneo



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wow. bittersweet but beautifully written

Posted 4 Years Ago


"leave you with rememberance, of the nights we talked
to the break of dawn and the days we spent walking along
to the beat of our own little song."
That is some good poetry...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


I like it

Posted 4 Years Ago


wrote this to remind myself to always remember. if you read this please leave a reviw and give apropriate points. as it is im trying to prove to myself that im a good writter


Posted 4 Years Ago


I love the beginning lines, but the whole thing really epresses your emotions. Great job, I really enjoyed it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Siliousneo

4 Years Ago

thank you hun its how i still feel if only things would have turned out differently
Silhouette

4 Years Ago

*nod* you're welcome.

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Added on October 23, 2012
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Siliousneo
Siliousneo

Williams, MN



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Im a father of four with a history most people judge me the wrong way simply cause of my past all im trying to do is get by hope you like what i have to put down here as they are things ive felt over .. more..

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