rememberance

the stars,the clouds,the heavens above

no one will understand the kind of love

that comes to you when you least expect it

and sticks with you through the worst and the best of it

we have that love you cant regret it, for it will always

leave you with rememberance, of the nights we talked

to the break of dawn and the days we spent walking along

to the beat of our own little song, so when your down just

dont forget it, that we share this love and rememberance

Reviews

[Soul Fire]

wow. bittersweet but beautifully written

[Sami Khalil]

"leave you with rememberance, of the nights we talked
to the break of dawn and the days we spent walking along
to the beat of our own little song."
That is some good poetry...:)

[babygirl]

I like it

[Siliousneo]

wrote this to remind myself to always remember. if you read this please leave a reviw and give apropriate points. as it is im trying to prove to myself that im a good writter

[Silhouette]

I love the beginning lines, but the whole thing really epresses your emotions. Great job, I really enjoyed it.

[Siliousneo]

thank you hun its how i still feel if only things would have turned out differently

[Silhouette]

*nod* you're welcome.