You don't know me

scary kind of creepy

You cant see me

but you know I'm here

You feel it get colder in the air

 

You don't know me

but I know you

every night I come creeping through your dreams

 

I make little kids scream

I make adults feel uneasy

do you feel that

 

You don't know me

yet I'm here

watching you always

 

I know your every move

your every breath

you don't know me

 

Your not safe

I'm lurking around always

I see you every second

 

I give you goosebumps when you pass by

I keep you cold even on a summer night

I stare at you the whole night

 

You know I'm watching

but oh from where

haha the fright I see in your eyes

 

You don't know me

One day you will

I'm not going to hide forever

 

I'm coming to take you away with me

and never let go

You will stay with me

You will always know

Author's Note

think about the feeling of being watched

Reviews

[allura]

i like this poem, it has a creepy aspect, that made me laugh a little. very good and unique write

[Adri Moolman]

thank you

[Rob Santana]

Creepy indeed, helluva job.

[Adri Moolman]

thank you

[TLK]

I don't think the author's note is needed -- this piece gave me a strong feeling of an unknown and unwanted lurker.

Typo: "Your not save" should be "you're not safe".

[Adri Moolman]

thx sowy stupid mistake

[Ency Bearis]

Now I know you. Nice self revelation good write and concept.

[Adri Moolman]

thank u

[NITHIN PURPLE]

good poe,m

[Prritiy]

nice!

[whitefang311]

very good

[Gaurav Walia]

I liked it so much that i shared your link to this poem on my facebook... nice one

[Adri Moolman]

awww thanks sooo much

[Gaurav Walia]

you're quite welcome.. :D

[Baby Ricochet]

Stalker creepy like the other one

[Adri Moolman]

hahaha

[Delaney]

This is a very creepy sort of feel to it. Like shivers down your spine. It held a lot of anticipation, and I enjoyed the perspective of the antagonist. Very well done. The only negative things I have to say are there a couple, minor grammatical errors, but those are easily fixed. And the phrase, "I keep you cold even on a summer night/I stare at you the whole night" is a little redundant sounding, just because both lines end with night. If you could alter that, I think it'd be in your best interest, but if you like it like that by all means, keep it. Just a suggestion!

Yours truly, Delaney

[Adri Moolman]

thank a lot