My Wife

My Wife

A Poem by melissaepike
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"Her beauty is amplified by her unrefined exterior..."

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Her beauty is amplified by her unrefined exterior

She lays, submerged in allure

This woman has tresses that gently border her expression,

Composing a visual so tempting

A toasted complexion fused with almond designed eyes, a petite nose, and lusciously plump lips

Her skin, maintains silky to caress throughout her full physique

From her significant breasts,

To her fleshy abdominal region she has been drenched in gorgeousness

Her restricted territory receives my adoration along with her limbs stretched atop our mattress

This Woman is my lover, my friend, and my everything

She is flawed in all the right places, with loveliness through and through

To craft the most stunning woman I have ever set eyes on


© 2013 melissaepike



Author's Note

melissaepike
I would love feedback for this piece. I accept all forms- constructive criticism, etc.

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very nicely written and formatted

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

melissaepike

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Onesimbah

4 Years Ago

I love the pentameter of the poem! I also love how descriptive it is.... I felt the emotion in it.
melissaepike

4 Years Ago

Thank you thank you!

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Added on March 27, 2013
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Tags: beautiful, wife, marriage, gay, lesbian, women, femenism, body, allure, temptation, skin, perfection, girl, beauty, fierce, expression, gentle, words, amplified

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melissaepike
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My name is Melissa, I am an aspiring author/poet living in the Boston area. My writing is heavily inspired by my beautiful wife, as you will soon learn. I hope you enjoy, feedback is always welcome! more..

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