Thinking About You

Thinking About You

A Poem by Mohit Gautam

Thinking about you
Isn't to be blamed
Fault is in the choice
Of heart, that beats on unwilling you,

Waking up in the desolated dessert
Surrounded by sand of loneliness
Hot breeze of Sigh
Giving mirage of expectations
That just only,
Takes me to depression

Thinking about you,
All day long,
knitting the hollow dreams
hand in hand & hugs, it screams

The kind mind, as an oasis
Trying hard to give you pauses
But the cruel sun-heart
Overpowering it, rejuvenates emotional blast

There is someone for you
But I still think about you
Hoping you could be mine
Shining eyes nine to nine

-Mohit Gautam :(

© 2018 Mohit Gautam



Author's Note

Mohit Gautam
Comparison to loneliness of dessert and it's characteristics features.

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Gd job bro...shining eyes nine to nine...wow!!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mohit Gautam

8 Months Ago

Thanks for the review Govind
Great poetry, Mohit. I particularly enjoyed the last stanza. Can’t wait to read more

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mohit Gautam

9 Months Ago

Thanks. Nice to know that. Will try to publish it ASAP.
Really nice poetry with great words..!! Keep it up...

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mohit Gautam

9 Months Ago

Thank you dear 😊
Very well written and great imagery! I could feel what you were saying and I have related to them in the past. Good job and I can't wait to read more!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mohit Gautam

9 Months Ago

Thanks Allaura😉
AllauraRose

9 Months Ago

Any time!!
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your words are easy to read and relate to. I really like your writing. Good work :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mohit Gautam

9 Months Ago

Thanks. Appreciate your comment.
I never thought that I would be appreciated that much.
You expressed your emotions really well.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

It was my pleasure reading this,
Did you read my work?
Mohit Gautam

9 Months Ago

Not all. You have so many works. I was in dilemma which one to read.
😅😅
Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

Oh! Thank you for taking the time to read those. I appreciate it.

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Added on March 3, 2018
Last Updated on March 11, 2018
Tags: Love, depression, romance, sad, depressed, feelings, jealousy, life, teen

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Mohit Gautam
Mohit Gautam

Dharuhera, Haryana, India



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