A Poem by MichaelGrisby

Your flaws make you perfect,

Something I wouldn’t neglect,

More so respect,

Baby, just take my hand,

I know it seems a little suspect,

My loving is defect,

Without you

© 2013 MichaelGrisby

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Emotional. You didn't have to say too much. Got my emotions rolling. Love is a beautiful thing. Taken away, it can destroy a person.

Posted 5 Years Ago

awwwh, poor half side of the heart

Posted 5 Years Ago

This casual seemingly slight poem kicks off with a profound paradox and all those clunky end rhymes simply add to the charm of the piece. Delightful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

Thank you very much.

5 Years Ago

Your very welcome.

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3 Reviews
Added on May 9, 2012
Last Updated on February 19, 2013
Tags: Love, Life, Heart, Happy, Smile, Us, You, Me