I'll Be Loving You

Something I was trying to put to music.

In the middle of a Texas storm

In the thunder and the pouring rain

In the hail from a tornado

Like a raven in a hurricane

When the sun has refused to shine

And the clouds all know my name

I want to cry but I don't have time

When I'm thinking it's a dirty shame

I think of you and I have to smile

I remember all the things we've done

Makes my whole life seem worthwhile

And even if it all comes undone

I'll be loving you, I'll be loving you

Sure as the sky above me must return to blue

I'll keep thinking of you

Knowing that you love me too

I may long to hold you

And if I haven't told you lately

I'll be loving you

In the church on a Sunday morn

In a field of flowers blue

From the first day I was born

I was made for loving you

When the sun shines down above

When my radio makes me sing

I'm reminded of your love

How you taught me every little thing

Daddy, listen and believe me

I will never get so grown

I need you like you need me

And our hearts still beat as one and...

I'll be loving you, I'll be loving you

Sure as the sky above me must return to blue

I'll keep thinking of you

Knowing that you love me too

I may long to hold you

And if I haven't told you lately

I'll be loving you

 

 

Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

This would suit being turned into a song, I think. I write songs too, although I usually write the music first. Only very rarely have I turned one of my poems into a song. I enjoyed the read. ~Robert~

[Gee]

Beautiful, dad will be chuffed

[Michele Devlin]

Thanks...always a daddy's girl. He gave me my sense of self-worth and respect. :o) So nice of you to comment.

[Lorry]

Beautiful, heartfelt words, seeping from heart, to pen, to paper, effortlessly.

[Michele Devlin]

Gee thanks...just trying write a song for my dad.

[Lorry]

You're welcome. Hope it falls into place soon....Or should that be fall into key? Hmm, just given myself a sore head :)