My Kindness

My Kindness ended 

not with a whimper

but with a bang

People died

Hearts were broken

Innocence was speared

tears were shed

and the complacent were left defenseless

the truth of their fragility laid clear and bare

A good man died that day

Limbs were shattered

None were left with a leg to stand on

Except one who walked away

Reviews

[written in blood]

very dark and quite frightening..

[Yellow Butterfly]

You can feel the sorrow in this write...

My kindness ended....

Sometimes we have to find it in our hearts to forgive..... but nothing will ever stop one from forgetting....

Very poignant write and well penned..

[Arly Parent]

Thanks for reading. You're getting to the core of it but I'll say that...sometimes...all you DO is forgive. And that...takes its toll as well. It's a slow poison if one isn't careful and can kill a good man.

[Yellow Butterfly]

I hear you...

[Essence London]

Powerful language.

As if a lack of chaos depended on that one narrator's Kindness.

I like the white space that you left around the one liners "People died" and "A good man died that day."

[Krystal Nicole]

wow! very good write!! :)