Change of Heart

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Mother: Hi honey how was work

Father: Oh the boss says i have to stay late tomorrow as well

Mother: How unfortunate it's Daiki birthday tomorrow, well i guess it can't be helped,foods on the table

Father: Thanks hun i'm starving

Mother: Daiki go wash your hands and then come to the table to eat

(Mom and Dad are both at the table, Daiki is in the bathroom struggling to open the faucet)

BOOM!

Mother: Ah Tadao!!!

(Mom dies)

Father: No Shinju!!! Daiki run,run Daiki!!!

(Dad dies, Daiki  hears the yelling and comes running out to see his parents dead on the floor, the Mimics turns to Daiki)

Mimic: Gaaarrh!

(Faint beeping can be heard in the background)

Daiki: No!!!

(Daiki wakes up and is covered in sweat, he hits the alarm)

Aunt: Wake up Daiki you're going to be late

Daiki: D****t i can't be late

Aunt/: Hurry before you miss the train

(Daiki gets dressed and performs other morning duties)

Daiki: Okay i'm running out the door now

Aunt: Wait, make sure you come over as often as you can okay

Daiki: I promise i will, i'm going to miss you Kasumi, thank you for all that you have done for me

(Kasumi gives him a kiss on the cheek)

Daiki: Bye then

Kasumi: Good luck

(Daiki rushes through the front door, he continues to run through crowded streets and manages to get on the train at the last minute,he spots a girl he knows)

Daiki: What is she doing on this train is she headed to the same place as me

(Hitomi turns around and notices aiki looking over in her direction, Daiki turns back around)

Daiki: Did she see me oh well, finally out on my own and starting new chapter in my life

(Daiki lays his head back and takes a nap...)

...

Daiki: Finally we made it

(He walks towards the exit and bumps into Hitomi)

Daiki: My bad

Hitomi: It's okay

Annoncer 1: Welcome all new arriving students, welcome to Insignia Academy, for all new arriving first year students there will be an assembly to be held later today

Annoncer 2: Please follow me and I will show you to your rooms...

...

Annoncer 2: These dorms are not separated by sex, you all will be living here together

(Daiki gets shown to his room opens the door)

Daki:  Well this isn't such a bad room it's a lot cleaner than my old room

(Daiki  unpacks and notices the time and hurrys to the assembly,as he was walking out his room to his surprise Hitomi lives in the room in front of him, he quickly finds a seat at the auditorium)

Headmaster: Welcome all first year students, now you are all here for one reason or another , I am here for one reason and that's to train the world's greatest troops, now I will separate you all into groups of 3

Daiki: Were being pared already

Headmaster: Now when I call your name please stay seated and wait for me to finish calling names, okay first up Daiki Takeo

Daiki: First up already

Headmaster: Next up Akihiko Atashui

Daiki: That guy looks familiar even his name sounds familiar

Headmaster: And finally Hitomi Yukiko, you three will be on Team 1 lead by Daiki Takeo,you three may leave and get ready for tomorrow's training , dismissed

Daiki: Maybe i should ask Hitomi if she wants to walk back together

Daiki: Hey

(Hitomi turns around)

Daiki: Hey do you wanna walk back together

Hitomi:Sure!

Hitomi: Why would he ask me!

(The two walk back to their rooms)

Daiki: Well nice to meet you i hope we will work well together

Hitomi: Yeah me too, we'll see you tomorrow

(Hitomi rushes into the rushes into her room with her face flushed)

Daiki: Bye

(Daiki walks into his room)

Daiki: What a good first day,well i better get this cleaned

(Daiki pulls sword from behind his door)

Reviews

[kclyaine]

Its a nice story but you need to put more details to it. I didn't understand the part where his parents died. And there are some grammar and spelling mistakes. But the story is ok.

[rosieposie]

I like this. The dream in the beginning really pulls you into the story. You had a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but the story is very interesting and keeps your attention. The hook at the end leaves me wanting to read more!