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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Snow is Falling

Snow is Falling

A Poem by Jimmy Seaman
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Request by Forever Hidden. I took your nature idea.

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The snow is falling, 
It shimmers like glass.

The snow is falling, 
It twinkles like stars.

The snow is falling,
Last season has passed. 

The snow is falling,
It's time for bed,
When you wake your sleepy head,
We shall all be waiting,
For you to get out of bed.

It's winter time.

© 2014 Jimmy Seaman


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Very well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wonderful piece.
You have vividly shown the falling of snow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was great! Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed taking a walk through your snow. Filled my head with wonder... Thank you for sharing !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oooo I like it! :D
The last stanza was my favorite though xD
Hehe.
Job well done ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jimmy Seaman

11 Years Ago

Haha thanks :3
Awesome! I like the orchestration of mood here and the last stanza! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jimmy Seaman

11 Years Ago

Thanks ^_^
Felicity's Eve

11 Years Ago

^^

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Jimmy Seaman
Jimmy Seaman

Velva, ND



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