I wish

I wish

A Poem by Nin_Com_Soup

The steady breaths of my classmates envelop me into a state of calm and serenity. But it's your breath i pay attention to. I listen for your voice, your smile, yet you seem not to notice...i wish you did..

We share music, food, stories, and laughter, you look at my work for inspiration and i yours. I can feel the heat radiating off your body. I can feel how you care for others. I don't know if you care for me the way i to you, i wish you did

I can see how you think, how your nose twitches and you look up slightly. How your breath slows and you forget about reality. I can see the way your hair changes over the day, from combed and neat in the morning to frizzed and wild when we go home. I notice alot about you but you don't about me..i wish you did

I love you, a love indescribable, but you don't feel the same..i wish you did

I wanted to tell you this before

I wish i did

© 2016 Nin_Com_Soup

Author's Note

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How cute. The sweet observations and repetition worked really well. I liked this little prose poem. :)
Stay inspired!

Posted 2 Years Ago

Wow, I've felt this way about a girl before, of course me being the loner I am, she never really noticed me. but hey, life goes on right? I ended up learning she likes the kid that I don't like so much, so i guess it wouldn't of worked out anyways. Reading you beautiful poem reminded me of liking this girl and how I felt, and if this is how you feel about someone, I say go for it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 Years Ago

The sad part is i did :/ it did not work out..but awell :) and thank you for your review! :D

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Added on September 9, 2016
Last Updated on September 9, 2016
Tags: Love, romance, hope, wish, beg, regret




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