The Brightest Star

For Someone.

She is the brightest star in my infinite blue sky

Longfully searching for her light among the nightly crowd

I wish to hold her high, high enough for her to fly

Away from her fears and sit her above on a cloud

So pure and soft, tricking her into a delicate sleep

Sweetly, her precious face glowing with innocence

Her heart so tender, she eternally holds mine to keep

Forever, intertwined by undoubted fate and destiny

Unlocked by the love in our hearts, the key

Immeasurable love, in her arms do I belong.

Reviews

[Chris Lotus]

This is really really nice!! I love the metaphors and word usage throughtout...this is quite enlightening and loveable!