Haiku New Piggy Tale

Haiku New Piggy Tale

This little piggy

Dug into hot sandy beach

Trying to get cool

 

 

This little piggy

Wiggles all around the sand

Chuckles in the sand

 

 

 

This little piggy

Plays hot foot jumping around

Sisters jumping too

 

 

 

This little piggy

Laughing when sand tickles her

Foot and heel laugh too

 

 

 

This little piggy

Hula dancing in the sand

Sisters follow suit

 

 

This little piggy

Chases his brothers away

Tag you’re it, he says

 

 

This little piggy

Plays football on sandy beach

Plays touch not tackle

 

 

 

This little piggy

Watches all the pretty girls

He is a wolf toe

 

 

 

This little piggy

Are buried with his brothers

Sleeps in the warm sand

 

 

This little piggy

Hangs ten on a red surfboard

Brothers, sisters too

Author's Note

A day spent with my grandchildren at the lake.

Reviews

[whimzygirl]

This is a cute write. Should be in a children's book

[Tony]

Those ten haiku, representing ten toes of your grandchildren are amazing and very humorous. This is great, your imagination shines through in the sand. I enjoyed this.

Tony

[Masquerade]

This is so cute and creative. Nice job!

[.]

So cute
I liked this one:

"This little piggy
Plays hot foot jumping around
Sisters jumping too"

It's such a funny picture

[Anastasia Starlena]

This is so much fun absolutely a cute piece. Dying now to play piggies with my 3 year old. :)

[Steve H]

Haha i love it :)
I hope your grandchildren get to see this! Its cute!