His Whispers

AUDEN TANKA

His Whispers

His whispers roll in with the waves

He’s calling out my name

I know it can’t be him, but

Still I reach for him

His ship went down in the storm

No survivors were ever found

© 2009 Nancy Lee Shrader

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whimzygirl

Sooo sad.

Posted 14 Years Ago

Cherry Berry

This is a mysteriously haunting piece. It compells my own imagination to run wild. I enjoyed reading this.
xox
Cherri

Posted 15 Years Ago

angelina neves

beautiful and sad

Posted 15 Years Ago

Alaska Frost

Very well-written poem. Beautiful and sad....
-Alaska Frost :)

P.S.- Congratulations on your win in the "Beauty of Nature" contest!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago

Helena

Sad little Tanka that was well penned!

Thank you for submitting this to Sal's contest ~ Helena

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on April 11, 2009

Author

Nancy Lee Shrader

Beckley, WV

About

Nancy Lee Shrader resides in Beckley, West Virginia. She is author of three books IS IT NOW? The End of Days! IS HE MESSIAH? Messianic Prophecies Revealed! And The Curse of Mayweather House Nancy Lee .. more..