Haiku Moon Hits Your Eye

Haiku Moon Hits Your Eye     Sparkle in your eye Moonbeams glow, eyes glaze over Love is in the air Across sandy beach Lovers stroll under the moon Love glows in the heart Hearts of love unite Underneath a summer moon Kisses fill the night Marriage plans are made As the moon is on the rise Dreams of wedded bliss Baby’s nighttime moon Smiles down on baby sleeping Sweet dreams in the night Young child sings moon’s song In sing-song poetic rhyme Seeking God’s blessing Boy and girl meet Young love blooming with warm glow Moon song sung again Young couple in love Life’s cycle comes full circle Under golden moon   By Nancy Lee Shrader   © 2009 Nancy Lee Shrader (All rights reserved)

 

Reviews

[Bull Dog]

Cool Bean this is good

[Matthew Green]

A beautiful poem. I loved how you described the idea of life going round in a circle - a traditional idea, but you gave it new life! I also like the way you mention the moon in every verse; the moon is always there, during the whole of our life.
A great write!

[Queen Jummarrium]

That was so beautiful! it touched my soul and made me smile.
the third verse was my favorite. overall an amazing write!