Breathe

 

All weeds run amuck

Chaos builds in flowerbeds

Daisies cannot breathe

 

Breathe

Reviews

[Kristin Brecoe]

no offense. but i feel the need to shake you silly for the color font you used. keep in mind of the readers when you mess with your font. some people have bad vision or their computers interpret color differently. but it was a nice poem. and the picture is what really drew me in.

where do you find your pictures?

[Mioki]

This is very good. I like how you used a simple situation that we hardly think about, and turned it into something beautiful and meaningful. It takes a true writer to do something like that. Great poem.