"Game Over"

inspired by mem'ries of bali..:)

"Game Over"

I don't know how and why it ended,
I just wake up and our game is over.
God knows I've tried to patched the scratch
Just to be you and me together.
But it seems each temptress intervening;
Leaving me in misery and pain.

I really thought you were different
But, hell! you're much like the rest.
Seemingly good at first, amazingly perfect!
No wonder my friends don't like you
and it's about time to forget you!

If you'd ask for another chance
I'd probably say "NO"
You push me to go through
and now I'm done with you..

-=MGCN=-

Author's Note

it's just a piece inspired by the film mem'ries of bali...:)

Reviews

[bryandc15]

nice piece:)

[Jess]

wow nice poem natzky;-)hahahah,,,i like the line ''and now I'm done with you'''lakas ng loob.hehe,,tama yan,,bawasan n ang mga martir sa mundong ito...

[natzky]

hahahah...yeah, right...I'm a good person to forgive him, but not stupid enough to trust him again..lol's

[The dark story]

wow.thanks for sharing such a great poetry with us ......i really like the diction you have used and the emotions you have put in it..........really makes it animated.......great work!!.

[natzky]

tnx my dear friend..:)

[Katelyn]

good job! it was an enjoyable poem with a strong message.

[natzky]

thanks..heheh

[Rob Santana]

never seen that film,but good writing either way.

[natzky]

heheh..thanks for the review..;)

[Pax]

it was a very sad show, great write.

[natzky]

thanks for the review...;)

[natzky]

heheh...you've seen also the koreanovela mem'ries of bali?heheh...ganda nun dba kaso it has a very tragic ending?tskk..tskk

[Pax]

i just like the story line..but then..di ko na tinapos...sabi daw nila tragic daw...nag simatayan sa huli...

[natzky]

exactly...bnaril ng bida ung karibal nia taz ung girl then afterwards he found out that the girl she dearly loved did not betrayed her but its too late npatay nia n ung girl taz ngpkamaty dn xa...tsk..tsk

[natzky]

nice work keep it up.

[natzky]

thanks...for the review..;)

[Seanne Tholltree]

G O O D !

[natzky]

heheh...nk'capz tlagah...lol's

[lady france]

nice piece natz

[natzky]

thanks...:)heheh

[CHRIS ANDES]

hi natzky,
this one really amaze me,
well, your experience molds you to be better
=]

[natzky]

nakanakz....experience tlgah?lol's...
anyhow...tnx for the review musicfunk....muahhh..