Broken Heart

Broken Heart

A Poem by nightmask
"

"when the heart breaks how do you fix it?"

"

 I gave you my heart and you broke it,

millions of shattered pieces with dying blood,

Then you threw it back at me but all I said was

"keep it were done."

watch me as I float away

leaving my

lifeless

body behind

leave my

wounded

heart unmeneded

just as you intended

leave my timeless love alone

you ripped out my heart

and stole it but I just cried

and smiled "you can keep it"

I'll never love again.

© 2008 nightmask


Author's Note

nightmask
hope u like :)

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Now that you cracked my heart in half I will heal it without a trace of your face.Enjoyed this poem many words with meaning can be said without it being two pages long, Shelly

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"keep it were done"...
shockingly poetic, for four simple words.
I can't even explain why, but I really like that sentence...
Keep up the good work.
Rion

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 18, 2008
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i am me, there is not much else to say. i like sweeney todd, tim burton, anime, and bright shiny colors, lol(z) ha ha. i was recently diagnosed with abcd, no...wait...asbd....adad.....ughhh......(mean.. more..

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