Get The F**k Out Of My Jungle

Oh, how sneaky.

Oh, how vindictive you are.

You have been shipped away, yet there are still marks of your venom in my jungle.

The poisonous snake lurks through my jungle, and hurts because she has been hurt.

Cut off from her family.

Cut off from her friends.

Lost in the guilt and hurt that comes with being herself.

Hoping to release her pain through venom.

We love her.

And her venom had almost become addictive.

I was forced to slice her open,

Snatch out her tongue,

and dump her heart into the Atlantic Ocean.

Stay The F**k Out Of My Jungle.

Reviews

[octane143]

I was forced to slice her open,

Snatch out her tongue,

and dump her heart into the Atlantic Ocean.

Stay The F**k Out Of My Jungle.

Seems to me the vindictive hurtful b***h got what she deserved. Unapologetic and dark, to the point. You did what you had to survive as King of Your Jungle.
I really liked it!

[Ravenskald]

You know I need to hear this with a backtrack, little bit of music, and would work really well as a performance. Love this bit ...
"And her venom had almost become addictive.
I was forced to slice her open,
Snatch out her tongue,
and dump her heart into the Atlantic Ocean."

Yep bad love affair, all the signs addiction and loathing hand in hand .
~raven

[Spoken]

wow.. dark. i'm not sure, i don't think this is about drugs, but perhaps hurtful words or things being said by another who has been hurt herself and that is why she lashes out. sometimes we can be the enablers, so we must cut them loose and let them go to account for their own actions. Well written interesting piece my friend..

[The Lady Anasteja]

Dude, no clue your meaning, however it's bitchin'!

Lost in the guilt and hurt that comes with being herself.
Hoping to release her pain through venom.
We love her.
And her venom had almost become addictive.

- pure - angry - true- poetry as it's best!

[Kendall Edison]

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Like yeah No really this is good

[The Devil's Own B***h]

Wow! Talk about a powerful poem!!!!!

Nicely done!

Josie