IT

IT

A Poem by mae23

Wingless, it flies

Mouthless, it mutters

Voiceless, it cries

Flightless, it flutters


Mindless, it creeps

Fearless, it burns

Restless, it sleeps

Brainless, it yearns


Soulless, it stares

Heartless, it hates

Faceless, it scares

Timeless, it waits



© 2017 mae23



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Nice use of words and thoughts. You made the reader think. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


mae23

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the review!
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Mae.
Wonderfully written. Lends itself to more than one interpretation, and I like that.

Posted 3 Months Ago


mae23

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
This is an Amazing piece, keep it up

Posted 3 Months Ago


mae23

3 Months Ago

Thank you!
I really like the paradoxes you used to write this one. I like to think of the "it" being mentioned as temptation because I think it fits well (correct me if I'm wrong), and it most heavily resonates with "Fearless, it burns," and "Brainless, it yearns." Excellently penned.

Posted 3 Months Ago


mae23

3 Months Ago

Thank you! And yes that works, I wasn't thinking of that while writing but when thinking that while .. read more

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