Forest Family

Forest Family

A Poem by Souladareatease

I ran to my forest, for it is all I wish to know

the eaves of the family, hollow ol' oak

leaves blow gently amble my way

weeps like the willow, Mother would say

for nary a one, this vestige but smoke

As faint decreed plants sing on a breeze

where doth thou traverse this spell

tis only where my head has fell

to act surprised, nay they be

but sullen and quiet, stung

by a bee, lived in these woods

the mountains my home,

I have been far, mini, a Rome

but always come back, shining light on.

Many things pass...

path

      par

          presence

so within ...

  . . . callings

I lit the candle, and put in my window

for

   laced among curtains

a purpled veil did fall, skinned

velveteen skied eyes 

were all that was now

tulle and stars

flame

   d       n      e      n     a    p     r

a      a      c       a     d     s    a     k,   slowly Laughing

mystified,

by a storms chase,

alive likened light, brighten my forest

as I ride the night, embraced

forever humbled

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

 

© 2013 Souladareatease


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"stung
by a bee, lived in these woods
the mountains my home,
I have been far, mini, a Rome
but always come back, shining light on."
Those are my favorite lines in this magical write...Well penned as usual...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Souladareatease

11 Years Ago

I thank You Sami!!! It wasn't quite as shaped as I had hoped...but some bits I enjoy...appreciate th.. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure . Ant time...:)
To find your way back home... truly marvelous to say the least. Home the once place you may return to; regardless of your actions, you will still be welcomed. Excellent write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Souladareatease

11 Years Ago

indeed so true!!! thank You Creation:)
Very cool. This had an e.e.cummings feel to it. I like the theme and how it took me to another place as I read. Very nice indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Souladareatease

11 Years Ago

Thanks Jack I'm Humbled!!!
It was a quick write, I shouldive done better...but...foods callin.. read more

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Added on April 19, 2013
Last Updated on April 19, 2013
Tags: Seperation of family bonds, love, hopes, promises